Poets today-A discussion of personal peotry

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This thread is about the discussion of pieces of poetry made by any member of the INTPc community. As a discussion it is hereby disallowed to post continuous lists of poetry on this thread. It is a discussion and as such your poetry will be discussed. Anyone willing can do so now, please make sure there are several (at least 3) comments to the previous poem before posting a new poem.

[kelseyw93]

I wrote this poem a while ago.
It's kind of dark, but I'd appreciate feedback

Dead and Dead
The stunted growth
Of broken hearts
In silence
As their love departs.
Your voice
I can no longer hear
Yet it whispers still
Burns, soft and clear.
With thoughts of you
My hands, they shake
My cheeks, they dampen
My eyes, they ache
What once was lost
Again is found
Lost once more
So quickly drowned
And as I lay
Suns rays on my head
I think of this love
That once again
Is dead